Asttle Writing Test (Music Is More Important Than Sport)




I strongly agree that Music is better than Sport with my personal opinion.  With me going over 3
reasons that will hopefully make you think alike my opinion that  Music triumphs over Sport in several ways

Firstly, most sports involve extreme amounts of violence : Rugby, Gridiron, Soccer and  others having unruly sportsmanship, also with fatal life threatening injuries, with most sports people dieing at a young age.  With music being a gentle, stress relieving and also comes in different types that all have different styles depending on your mood or if they are trying to tell a story.

Secondly, music is psychologically better.  Music makes the brain think, gives wonderful hand  and eye coordination.  Making the user have great multitasking abilities  in everyday life.  Music develops great skill also in other academic fields with a lot of mathematical ideas in the key playing.

Finally, music has more skill.  With sports each sport can easily be mastered, but most only play one or two sports.  With music one person can learn and play thousands of different unique styles without getting muddled up between types, with music being more complicated making you work harder and practice harder making you more psychologically fit than if you play sport.

With music growing stronger everyday it has became something that if you don’t know about it the chances are you would never be able to read this without know about music in the modern culture.  With things like iTunes and Spotify becoming the most popular applications, I is certain than music is widely regarded throughout  the world with it dating back thousands of years!  I hope this has convinced you or made you concede the point that is ‘Music Is More Important Than Sport’.



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